Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Would you prefer Traditional Surgery or Robotic Surgury?




Robot Surgery, (2010) written by Jacqueline Owen

Jacqueline Owen list the advantages and disadvantages of robot surgery which i think we can all agree that makes more sense to have in our hospitals now and in the future .

Reading the passage and looking at the advantages the the advantages are more for the patience, as for the disadvantages are more towards the hospitals. Having the robot surgery done on patience  lowers the risk of infections and complication , less trauma and also  released from the hospital sooner which lowers the cost of staying in the hospital.

Then you have your disadvantages  which in the case would be expenses . In the passage it says that one robotic surgery systems costing one million dollars and some maintenance fee, some hospitals have a hard time justifying the expense even with the savings on shorter hospital stays.

Looking at both advantages and disadvantages  the advantages will only get better and the disadvantages will only get smaller for an example , we look at the expenses of medicine back in time it wasn't very cheap but as time past it was cheaper. As time goes by robotic surgery will only get more advance and less complicated and less of an expense since it will be more common.  Taking away more and more disadvantages over time it is a must have process

Would you prefer Traditional Surgery or Robotic Surgery ?

GET YOUR PAPER NOW!!


Free Online Paper Mills, (2010) written by Michelle Vu
Vu reveals two very commonly used paper mills, which have used their websites to entice students to take the easy way out, just at the click of a button.  Vu definitely tries to sway students from being pulled into websites, such as E cheat and Custom Writings.com, with their seemingly flawless essay.
Overall Vu emphasized, these websites are more than less hypocritical and actually quite contradictory.  Free, Free, Free, what a promising sales pitch for last minute writers. Vu’s purpose was to demonstrate the easy 1,2,3 steps of finding what seems to be the right words and just what you were thinking of already written . E cheat proclaims no plagiarism yet the name of the site is “e cheat”. Where as, Customized Writings takes the business approach by offering professionalism and guarantees (Vu 139).   The entire purpose of these websites is to ensure students, such as myself, that it is not necessary to stay up all night stressing, Just search, click and in a matter of minutes we have the perfect paper.
How perfect is it,”100% plagiarism free” and interestingly so reading the fine print always discloses the information we don’t want to accept. As students, we should not be amongst the 90% procrastinator and 30% panic and face our responsibilities head on. As writers, we should strive for excellence without “risking academic integrity” (Vu 139) with a click of a mouse.    

Friday, August 26, 2011

THE CHOICE IS YOURS


Websites can either write the Essay for you or give guidelines for writing the Essay yourself. Kate Hindman has written an essay titled “Free Essay Websites: A Convenient Way to Plagiarize” in which she compares two websites, writemyessay.com and Essay-911.com; both are designed to write your “plagiarism free” essay. After visiting each website, I can see how a student would find it very tempting to just kick back and order his or her essay like ordering a specialty pizza for dinner. They click on each ingredient that is required in the essay, provide a credit card and hit the “Order Now” button, their specialty essay in the way. The student has purchased a custom paper and has bought every word. But, the work and effort put forth into the essay is not theirs. Both websites, mentioned in Ms Hindman’s essay, are very convincing with their effort to insure the buyer this is not plagiarism.  

Websites that will provide guidelines to write your essay yourself are just as easy to find. Enotes.com for example, their website only guides you with their “How to……” articles. They even have a “How to Avoid Plagiarism” article. 

The choice totally lies with the student. They can purchase an essay and hold their breath hoping the teacher does not suspect they have cheated. The other choice is to buckle down, do the research and write their essay.

Thursday, August 18, 2011

Is He or Isn't He?




Pastor Eddie Long he wasn't the first or will be the last, to use his power and position to influence others. Viewed as a mentor to many young men who trusted and also recognized him as spiritual leader an a father figure.  He has disappointed his community and congregation. There has been countless claims of physical and mental abuse , yet as a group we have to keep in mind in spite of being tried in the media he is innocent until proven guilty.